Last night, I saw a movie about a girl who behaved not well in the bus, someone took the video of what she did and pubished it on the Internet. The next day, the girl was condemned by the world, she finally suicided. The movie represents the violence of the Internet, it arises people’s thinking on the civilization of the Internet.

昨晚，我看了一部电影，这是关于一个女孩在公车上行为不雅，有人把她所做的拍下来并公布在网络上。第二天，女孩受到了全世界的谴责，最后她自杀了。电影体现了网络暴力，这引起了人们关于文明网络的思考。

As the development of the Internet, nowadays, people can share the information in a quick way. People have the access to the instance news and can give their opinions on the Internet. But we see from these years that as there is no rule to supervise the Internet, some people use this stage to attack others. The most famous example is that a famous Korean female star killed herself because of the rumor from the network. Though network allows us express our opinion, we should not attack others.

随着网络的发展，现在人们可以快速分享信息。人们可以接触到及时即时新闻，在网络上发表他们的看法。但是从这些年来看，没有条例监督网络，一些人使用这个平台去攻击其他人。最出名例子就是一个出名的韩国女明星由于网络的谣言而自杀了。即使网络让我们表达自己的看法，但是我们不应该攻击人。

The violence of network is much harmful to the body violence. Wrong rumors can destroy a person’s mind, the one who spread the rumor should be condemned, he is just like a killer who is out of responsibility. In order to civilize people’s behavior on the Internet, a law should be made to supervise the manipulation.

网络暴力比肢体暴力更加伤害人。错误的谣言能够摧毁一个人的心智，那些散步谣言的人应该受到谴责，他就好比一个不用负责任的杀手。为了使人们文明上网，应该制定法律来监督网络的操作。

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